Friday 25 July 2014

Poetry Shared at Assembly Today

Today some of our class shared poetry they had written over the past week.

What do you think? (Please leave your comments below.)

Haiku poems (5 syllables/ 7 syllables/ 5 syllables)



Cat

Lounging lazily
Sleeping on a bed of warmth
Like a furry king

Creeping, prowling through
the night. Slinking, stalking prey,
crouching quietly

An arrogant king
Sleeping on a throne of warmth
While ruling the house

An Egyptian god
A household king
Superior to others

- Ben B









Frozen

I hear the frost crunching under my shoes,
leaving my footprints behind me,
just missing the ice-cold water
that might numb my feet

Arriving at school,
the crisp, bitter concrete slips beneath my feet.
I run inside before I freeze,
I grab a drink but the tap is defrosting.
When it comes, the water is fresh.

Before my eyes
the world defrosts
like a gigantic ice cream.
It's not so bitter any more.

- Neo M



Winter
Winter is that time of year
when the sparkly ice takes over puddles.

Winter is the fresh start to the days,
when the glistening frost covers the grass.

Winter has the specialty of freshness, coldness
and bitter mornings.

Winter has the numbing touch 
that freezes my hands.

- Charlie C


Frost

 







White, crunchy grass.
Crispy, bitter air.
Icy roads that are slippery -
A frost is here.

- Jordan T


A Skyful of Grey


A skyful of grey,
While snowflakes glisten
Drifting, dancing till they fall.
As they settle on the ground
They melt and disappear
And all the fun has gone.

I stand upon the crunchy ice
That enveloped the field;
The trees above are naked and cold,
Encrusted all over with ice.

My nose is red
And my fingers deep blue.
No circulation of blood at all.
Embracing, the crispy, fresh air 
Is shaking my body to the bone.

- Caitlin H


The Webs of Cold
Shiny
crispy glass
grass

Webs of 
silver and
bracing ice-wind

The silentness
of the world
and the freezing cold.

And all the spiders,
frozen in time,
make me wonder why, oh why,
do they build 
webs of cold?

- Jazz R